More and more businesses as well as individuals are choosing to communicate either professionally or socially using technology rather than being face to face. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of using technology for communicating.

In recent years, it is often suggested that the individually and collectively public

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to use online communities rather than direct conversation. In

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essay, I will elaborate on the merit and demerit of

internet

communication, using science technology progress, in the social

industry

and personally.

To begin

with, one can see that there is a major drawback of utilizing

internet

sites to converse between customers and enterprises. For business

industry

, on account of the online community growth, the conglomerates had committed crimes for productive benefits.

Therefore

, those companies would make aggressive advertisements.

However

, buyers have to believe

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due to the traits of

internet

sites.

For example

, one famous cosmetic brand in Korea as 'the Aritaum',

this

company made their cosmetic items by vicious resources to the human's skin.

Moreover

, the corporation conducted the frauds to customers, using

internet

banner advertisements.

Therefore

, it is

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communicating on the

internet

would not occur always positive results.

On the contrary

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however

,

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benefits

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online communication's functions among individuals.

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these features could link between the virtual communities and the

real life

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for sharing personal information.

For instance

, the Instagram application, users could upload their ordinary pictures or post up to dated trends so that, the neighbours could follow others steps by the exposed various information, which would help to converse in

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Hence

, for those reasons, the advances in technology would bring merits influences in the social communities. In conclusion, utilizing the technic progress for communicating,

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usiness

industry

, is more likely to have

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impacts on individual society.

Therefore

, it is convincing that the relevant large enterprises should manage to make well-refined advertisements and the public

also

should come to a conclusion seriously before purchasing products. If people would maintain

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new solution well,

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industry

will occur proper results in order to communicate on the online.