Some say that news has no connection with most people’s life and it is a waste of time for most of us to read newspapers and watch television news programs. Do you agree or disagree?

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The

newspaper

and the

television

news program are the foremost

source

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from where we can get all information and current affairs.

However

, some people believe that reading

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ewspaper and watching

television

program is just

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aste of

time

and it has no connection with people's life. I disagree with the statement to a great extent and I will support my stand with valid arguments in the following paragraphs.

Firstly

, reading news is not a waste of

time

as we can get all kind of information from the

newspaper

and

television

news channel.

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, if a person reads

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ewspaper, they are aware of weather conditions, stock market ups and downs, national and international sports and many others.

Thus

, news

help

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people to gain more knowledge in every field.

Secondly

, news has

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ajor connection with people's

life

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as it

also

shows some critical

informations

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pread of deadly disease and prediction of natural calamities. While

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this

kind of news

are

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very important for people to know and keep themselves safe and all

this

news mainly printed in

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ewspaper or displayed on

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elevision. For illustration, due to spread of coronavirus, there was lockdown all over the world, in

this

time

the

newspaper

and news channel are the only source where we can get latest updates like

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accine and many others.

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, sometimes it is necessary for people to read

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ews. In conclusion, news has

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ajor impact on society and people should not take it as a waste of

time

, because it gives us immense knowledge about all sector.

Thus

, individuals should read it on regular basis and keep themselves aware

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the current situation.

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Some say that news has no connection with most people’s life and it is a waste of time for most of us to read newspapers and watch television news programs. Do you agree or disagree?

In many countries today, if people want to find work, they have to move away from their friends and families. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

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It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.