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In a cashless society, people use more credit cards. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this phenomenon?

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In today's world
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people are more inclined towards using
credit
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 leading to a cashless society. There are
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 many pros and cons for not using
monetry
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monetary
 transactions
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 which will be discussed
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, a cashless community provides more economic independence to a person which helps them to afford expensive items even if they have
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hortage of money.
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, one can easily pay their bills and do online shopping just sitting at home by using their
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 cards.
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 moneyless society has made purchases so effortless that a person need not
to
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go anywhere for doing all these transactions. There are endless benefits of having a
credit
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card
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, easy Monthly
installments
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 one of them too. With all these advantages an individual is attracted towards using these cards and make their life much easier.
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 of having
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numerous benefits of a cashless society,
credit
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 cards do have few demerits as well. Over expenditure is one of the primary con of having a
credit
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card
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 with oneself. Humans are tempted to spend more than what they earn, as they have more availability of
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.
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 can result in huge debts and
occassionally
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occasionally
 leads to bankruptcy as well.
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, if an individual
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looses
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 his/her
credit
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card
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, it can be easily misused by anyone. These days, hackers can easily hack these plastic cards online and spend millions on someone else name which is a high risk of having a
credit
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card
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. These cards
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 with
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great responsibility and have their benefits and drawback. In my opinion, if a person
use
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credit
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 cards carefully
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 they can be an asset to humankind. We as a user
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 should always be aware of all the frauds and misusage that can happen with them while using cards.
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