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Band 2.5

Some people are of the opinion that there should be a car-free day once every month, on which no private vehicles are allowed on the road. Discuss the advantages and possible disadvantages.

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Restricting the
use
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 of private
cars
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on
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 one
day
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 each
month
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 is believed by few people.
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 essay will explain the pros and cons
regarding
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this
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 opinion.
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 we avoid
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use
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the use
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 of
cars
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 for private
transport
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 on
single
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a single
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day
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 of every
month
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, it helps to reduce the pollution caused by vehicles to some extent. Take
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, where a lot of people travel
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use
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 public
transport
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 only on that specific
day
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 which thereby prevents the rate of pollution that may cause
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 the private car usage.
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 to that, it
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 benefits in
reduction
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 of hectic traffic that
usually
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 caused by extensive
use
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 of private
cars
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.
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, taking public
transport
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instead
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 of private vehicles saves people from heavy traffic that they generally see
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 driving their own or private
cars
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.
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, stopping
the
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private vehicle usage on a particular
day
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 in a
month
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pose
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 disadvantages considering
on
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apply
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grounds of health emergency where
the
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immediate
transport
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 is the
most
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 priority. In other words, there might be a scenario where a person met with an accident at
late
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the late
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 hour of
night
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 and needs to be admitted to hospital as soon as possible but with no private
transport
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 available, his life might be at risk. In conclusion, averting the
use
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 of private
vehicle
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vehicles
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 even on single time each
month
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 has its own fruits and hazards.

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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs

The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.

A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).

Stick to this essay structure:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

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