Some people are of the opinion that there should be a car-free day once every month, on which no private vehicles are allowed on the road. Discuss the advantages and possible disadvantages.

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of private
cars
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one
day
each
month
is believed by few people.
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essay will explain the pros and cons
regarding
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this
opinion.
Although
we avoid
use
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the use
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of
cars
for private
transport
on
single
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a single
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day
of every
month
, it helps to reduce the pollution caused by vehicles to some extent. Take
for instance
, where a lot of people travel
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public
transport
only on that specific
day
which thereby prevents the rate of pollution that may cause
due to
the private car usage.
In addition
to that, it
also
benefits in
reduction
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of hectic traffic that
usually
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caused by extensive
use
of private
cars
.
For example
, taking public
transport
instead
of private vehicles saves people from heavy traffic that they generally see
while
driving their own or private
cars
.
However
, stopping
the
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private vehicle usage on a particular
day
in a
month
pose
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disadvantages considering
on
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grounds of health emergency where
the
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immediate
transport
is the
most
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priority. In other words, there might be a scenario where a person met with an accident at
late
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the late
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hour of
night
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and needs to be admitted to hospital as soon as possible but with no private
transport
available, his life might be at risk. In conclusion, averting the
use
of private
vehicle
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vehicles
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even on single time each
month
has its own fruits and hazards.
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