The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before. What are the most serious problems associated with the internet and what solutions can you suggest?

The invention of the World Wide Web by Tim Bernese proved to be a turning point in the world of technology. It has opened various channels where users can share their information in a way that was not possible earlier. On the one hand
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has made our lives easier but
on the other hand
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it has
also
brought along several threats
such
as
cyber crimes
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and cyberbullying.
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essay will
first
discuss how the
internet
silently puts us at the risk of cybercrime and
then
suggest some solutions / measures
to
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tackle these issues. There are certain novel crimes that spread through social media platforms. Various types of
cyber
violation
such
as frauds, online money laundering and certain forms of malware which intend to steal a user’s private data are on the rise now. Because of the anonymity offered by the platform social media has become the paradise of hate mongers. They target other users and hurl abuses at them sitting behind their screen.
This
is nothing but cyberbullying. Teenagers are the most vulnerable targets of the
internet
. Nowadays, adult content which can be really harmful to them is easily available on the
internet
.
However
, these issues can be solved easily by implementing strict laws which intend to penalize the culprit. Many new users are not aware of the rules made by the government for these problems.
Hence
the government should run some kind of awareness sessions to ensure that people are aware of
cyber
laws and their right to privacy and protection.
For instance
, the Nigerian government in the year 2017 ran a successful campaign about
cyber
threats
such
as viruses and malware.
This
led to a dramatic reduction in data breaches.
Also
educating the young ones from an early age can be beneficial in stopping these crimes. Parents should
also
monitor the websites that are being used by their children and should implement certain firewalls to prevent their exposure to certain sensitive websites. To sum up, the
internet
has made our lives easier by providing us
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with various
options to share our data.
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it puts us at the risk of certain issues
such
as frauds, or scams. It
also
puts our privacy at risk. Even so, in my opinion, the impact of the
internet
on our lives is largely positive. As for the risks, there are several ways to mitigate them.
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