An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause? What solutions can you suggest to deal with this situation?

Developing countries or the
third
world are struggling from migrating of their professionals like scientists, engineers, doctors and so on to the
first
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nability of these countries to create and develop the main
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in
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these nations the opportunity to develop their
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society. The main reason why these professionals are migrating from their own home is
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roper
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reported that more than 50 present of professional people left middle east countries.
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in poor
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class
of people that they are leaving in
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their professional people to attract them to stay and work for their home and enhancing their living level.
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reported that after taking the above consideration the brain drain has reduced
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with past years.
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uitable
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rain brain.
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etter
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and hiking their life quality
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Brain drain
  • Skilled professionals
  • Healthcare systems
  • Education systems
  • Economic growth
  • Dependency on foreign aid
  • Social inequality
  • Quality healthcare
  • Quality education
  • Retain talent
  • International cooperation
  • Sustainable growth
  • Scholarships
  • Professional development
  • Remote work capabilities
  • Local research funding
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