Some people say History as one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than history. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

The
history
plays an important role in life and it is the most important
subject
in school as it is necessary to know about the cultures and traditions we had in past. Whereas, some people believe that
subject
related to
science
and
technology
are important in recent years.
This
essay will analyse both sides of the argument before arriving at a reasoned conclusion. On the one hand, there are certain reasons that school should keep
history
as
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ain
subject
because, students should know the heritage of the nation, and while learning
history
they can find their cultural and traditional identities.
For instance
,
university
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of China has
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istory as their main
subject
and they give knowledge about their rituals which was
thoudands
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thousands
years old and students feel honoured about their
history
.
On the other hand
, to cope up with today's world it is necessary to learn subjects like
science
and
technology
while there are few reasons behind
this
.
Firstly
, students who learn
technology
and scientific subjects may have
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righter career.
Secondly
, people who mastered in
science
, have more chances to get high paid-job as compare to
history
.
For example
, in
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ecent survey of Harvard University, it concluded that jobs in computer
science
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30% more than jobs in historical subjects. To conclude, in my opinion, individuals should receive education in subjects related to
science
and
technology
because at present due to technological advancement there is more demand
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technological knowledge.
Hence
, institutions should make
science
and
technology
as their crucial
subject
than
history
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • crucial
  • comprehend
  • retrospect
  • gain insights
  • reflect on
  • sharpen
  • evaluate
  • significance
  • heritage
  • legacy
  • advent
  • breakthroughs
  • sustain
  • sustainability
  • revolutions
  • empowered
  • overcome
  • transform
  • advancements
  • collaboration
  • cooperation
  • diversity
  • fulfilling
  • promote
  • facilitate
  • prosperity
  • enhance
  • foster
  • foundation
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