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Film stars and music celebrities may earn a great deal of money and live in luxurious surroundings, but many of them lead unhappy lives. Do you agree? To what extent is this the price they pay for being famous?

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Film land is a fantasy world and the celebrities and stars have a
life
 filled with luxuries. They do not have the scarcity of money but most of the
movie
 stars lead a disastrous personal
life
. I agree with the notion of
movie
 stars not happy with their lives and to a certain extent, leading an unhappy
life
 is the price they pay in return to their
fame
 earned.
First
 and foremost, in today's world,
fame
 is earned rather quickly when compared to the older days. After attaining the status of celebrity, not everyone is capable of handling
fame
. Some make silly mistakes and some get trapped in the web of
fame
.
For instance
, there are many superstars who struggled in handling the popularity in their initial days and cultivated bad habits of drugs. These are not a sign of any human enjoying his personal
life
.
Besides
, celebrities are covered closely by today's news channels or social media platforms. they do not enjoy the privacy like other commoners. Even the slightest of movement of theirs
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 is closely watched by the world. People are bound to make mistakes,
however
,
movie
 stars cannot afford to make mistakes in their lives as that can blow out of proportion in the media. To a certain extent, it is the
fame
 which brings
such
 a situation to them, because there are millions of people who are following their behaviour. The pressure of meeting that expectation is not possible by everyone. In conclusion, I agree that
fame
 comes with a price and the price is ruining their personal lives for
movie
 stars.
Although
, they do not lack the
life
 of luxury and comfort, the happiness and leading a peaceful
life
 is not so an easy task for any of the celebrities.
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