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Most scientific inventions and discoveries are worthless and only waste time and money resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your own opinion

#inventions #discoveries #waste #time #money #resources
Scientific inventions and discoveries are results of innumerable trials and research which incurs a lot of costs and
time
.
However
, it has been observed quite often that most scientific inventions are of no worth. In contradiction of the above, I disagree that most scientific inventions and discoveries are a waste of money and
time
. Though, they have helped humans in every best way possible in each sphere of life. Examples NASA's discovery of water on MARS has helped to prepare a life for the future.
Invention
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 of Vaccines against severe diseases or viruses is a real boon for mankind. Lighting bulb has decreased people's hours of
sleeping
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.
Initially
, when
b
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the
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ulb was not invented, people used to sleep for 10 hours a day. Scientific inventions and discoveries have always supported
the
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mankind either in a materialistic way of life or in the field of health and medicine. Researchers are
also
 working on reducing costs and managing timeliness. Government has
also
 planned to restrict researches or inventions only on the things which are worth spending
time
 and money on.
Therefore
, in my opinion
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scientific inventions never goes waste. It will be useful but it's just
the
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 matter of
time
 and requirement.
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