Several people assert that the main cause of crime is an economically disadvantaged background. However, others say that crime is caused by a person's nature. Discuss both ideas and give your own opinion.

People have always discussed what makes criminals

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commit crimes. Some people argue that a poor economic background is the main

reason

of

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committing crimes while others think the

reason

is one’s

nature

. In

this

essay, I will deal with both opinions and conclude with my idea, mostly what I think the main

reason

is. There are some people who say poor economic background triggers people to commit crimes because criminals cannot survive in

this

harsh world. Since they suffer from insufficient resources

such

as food and water, they are more likely to think about crimes and behave in wrong ways to maintain their lives.

For example

, committing frauds to earn big amount of money in

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hort time, can be a case. If they were economically advantaged people, they would not try to commit these

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.

Thus

, people who have a bad economic background tend to commit crimes more than others.

However

, other people suggest that people’s

nature

is the main

reason

for crimes. When it comes to serious crimes, some people take other’s lives away for no big

reason

.

Also

, some people rape and murder just because they enjoy committing

such

crimes and

this behaviors

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can be explained with their natures. A psychopath can be one example. A psychopath refers to those people who got brain damaged and

therefore

, who cannot able to empathize to others feelings. Psychopaths are more likely to abuse animals and commit murder, so

as a result

, the main

reason

for crime is people’s

nature

. In my opinion, I think one’s

nature

affects more than economic environments because there are people who work so hard to live under laws even though they are economically disadvantaged. A friend of mine,

for example

, work more than 90 hours per week while taking classes in her university. She is not a wealthy person, but she never thought about committing crimes. As there are so many people who try to live hard while not thinking about illegal things, the main

reason

for committing

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rime is people’s

nature

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