More people live alone today than they did in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? Give your opinion and relevant examples to support your view.
Technology has been developing with the passage of time. Now masses live free and convenient
life
but this
rapid development act as a curse for family and personal relationships.Now in the current scenario,most of the people live separate or alone. I presume the void between the families is formed due to development.Now,this
essay will discuss how enhancement affects people's life
.
To embark on, in past some people live alone due to work reasons or dispute with their family.This
is the only reason for them to live separate. But now people are busier in their hectic schedule to earn more and more money so they do not have a moment for their loved ones or family. So, unfortunately, this
can feeble the family bond and results in bad behaviour with each other. They started living alone. For instance
- in developed countries,both husband and wife are working and they have their own day or night shift. So most of the time couple meet after a few days although
they are living in the same house.
Along with this
, Now people are more educated and want to spend their life
own without any interference of their respective guardians. For example
- in India living with parents is in their roots but now because of developing technology and growth they leave their parents after marriage and starts living without their parents. Moreover
, now people pay very less attention towards their parents they do not treat them properly. So, this
is justified that advancement puts some bad impact on people's life
.
To put in the nutshell, No doubt improvement is crucial for the nations. But people should to pay more attention to their family relationship and need to give time to each their so the gap between them might fill with love and affection.Submitted by ijhajj692 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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