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Reading comics only rot the children's mind than to provide any good education. How far do you agree/disagree with this?

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Reading comics deteriorates the
children
's mind in spite of delivering better education.
This
 is highly debatable because the books
children
 read and how they perceive the knowledge imparted depends on person to person.
This
 essay will discuss the disagreement in the topic mentioned above. Comics reading helps to establish interests in
children
's to imagine and develop analytical skills.
Also
, it keeps them connected with books. Story reading doesn't impact
children
 negatively until they are learning from relevant books. Though it won't impart any knowledge to the kids have said that
this
 will enhance vocabulary, reading habits, analysis, thought process.
Therefore
, I disagree that comics reading won't suffice good education.
However
, it will enable
children
 to read and initiate book reading habit for an individual considering interests towards their superheroes or characters.
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