some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

It is common in the
society
that people do the judgment about an individual’s culture and personality from his or her appearance. Due to some of the psychological facts and despite
of
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the brain complexity, some of the subjective matters would
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in a
person
’s choice of
clothes
. It is agreed that the judgement would be accurate most of the times. As the case of study
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it would be useful to consider both neat and clean garnet and
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appearance. Appearing neat and clean in public places could be a sign of a better not only time management but
also
reliability of a citizen. As a clarification, there are two testimonies.
Firstly
, an individual with clean
clothes
, not expensive or luxurious, would plant the seed in the back of audience’s mind that s
/
he is a well-timing managed
person
, as spent enough time in order to be in
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situation and good looking.
Secondly
, a
person
with clean
clothes
would make us in our subconscious to consider her
/
him as a reliable
person
who cares about the vision beauties in public.
Therefore
, clean
clothes
would show us a
person
who not only has a well-managed lifestyle but
also
has a great sense of responsibility about
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society
. Choosing
colors
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and combine them together could be a sign of inner thoughts. As a matter of choosing
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, in
the
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most of the cultures, black is the
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uses for funerals and tragic situations.
Thus
, a
person
who wears
such
a monotone and dark
color
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could carry your mind in the way that s
/
he most of the times celebrate sadness in his or her mind.
On the contrary
, people who combining the
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, mostly the light
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, shows they are
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and happy individuals. To put some more light on the matter, using
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colors
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and even accessories clearly
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that she or he is a happy human being who is
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trying to bring the happiness to the surface of his personality,
secondly
attempting to intensify the sense of
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with nature in the other members of
society
. In my
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, they are making our public a more dynamic and livable place. All in all, it is acceptable that the appearance of a
person
could be a sign of his or her personality and the culture s
/
he coming from. We can spread a lot of signals from our inside thoughts and situation to
society
by choosing the way of wearing and the
colors
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of our
clothes
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • attire
  • fashion trends
  • individuality
  • first impressions
  • designer labels
  • social status
  • cultural appropriation
  • dress codes
  • traditional garments
  • sartorial choices
  • symbolism in clothing
  • cultural identity
  • expression of self
  • global fashion industry
  • cultural integration
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