Smoking is a major cause of serious illness and death throughout the world today.in the interest of the public health ,governments should ban cigarettes and other tobacco products.do you agree or disagree?

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banned or not. Some people would argue that smoking is a personal choice and that introducing laws to prevent people from smoking would be repressive.
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, I feel that
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should indeed be made illegal. There
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. It is important to remember that
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is actually a drug most countries around the world have strict laws against selling or using recreational drugs.
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,if governments want to consistent in the way they handle the problem of drug abuse,I believe that they must ban
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as well.
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is especially true considering the fact that many drugs which are now illegal,
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heroin and marijuana ,could be used by doctors to
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is useless.
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and even more importantly,though,smoking should be banned for the sake of public health.it is a proven fact that smoking causes serious illnesses,
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as lung cancer and heart disease.
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cigarette companies and
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groups may claim that people have the right to decide what to put into their own bodies,I would argue that the rights of society are more important than those of the individuals.the medical treatment smokers need when they get sick is often very expensive,and it is usually governments and society who pay the bill.
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,I believe that anti-smoking laws would be a good idea. To conclude,
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governments will probably not ban
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in the near future ,I feel
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should be the long-term goal as there are few habits as pointless and destructive as smoking.
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