Junk/Street Food is the most affordable meal for the working class. But health problems due to rampant and uncontrolled consumption are being compounded. It has therefore become imperative for governments to impose a higher tax on them. To what extent do you agree to this arrangement by the government? Give your opinion.

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is very popular amongst working professionals, but heavy consumption of junk

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can

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lead to several health hazards.

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, it is argued that the government should introduce higher tax reforms to control its consumption. I do not agree with

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fact and believe authorities should not interfere in

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matter.

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to support my opinion.

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, professionals usually have a very hectic life and

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,

street

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food

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is a convenient option that compliments their busy schedules.

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, it is extremely convenient for them because it is

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and affordable.

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,

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preference is a personal choice and adults understand the repercussions of unhealthy eating habits.

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, it is not fair that state authorities impose

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taxes on

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vendors.

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, increasing taxes on local

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stalls will lead to a price rise not making it an affordable option for

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workers.

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, hiking tariffs on junk

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could actually have an adverse impact on

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owners because there could be a possibility of them running out

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business

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reduced sales.

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,

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lead

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and poverty which can put unwanted pressure on the financial system of a country.

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, concerned authorities should not intervene and disturb small businesses. To illustrate,

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food

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trucks and

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hawkers hike their rates because of tax implications,

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they might cease to exist as a popular option across the working class. In conclusion,

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junk

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can lead to health issues if not consumed in a controlled manner, imposing higher excise duties on

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will severely affect its consumers

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have a tight budget and

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impact the livelihood of

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vendors.