Junk/Street Food is the most affordable meal for the working class. But health problems due to rampant and uncontrolled consumption are being compounded. It has therefore become imperative for governments to impose a higher tax on them. To what extent do you agree to this arrangement by the government? Give your opinion.

Street
food
is very popular amongst working professionals, but heavy consumption of junk
food
can
also
lead to several health hazards.
Hence
, it is argued that the government should introduce higher tax reforms to control its consumption. I do not agree with
this
fact and believe authorities should not interfere in
this
matter.
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to support my opinion.
Firstly
, professionals usually have a very hectic life and
therefore
,
street
food
is a convenient option that compliments their busy schedules.
Furthermore
, it is extremely convenient for them because it is
time saving
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and affordable.
Moreover
,
food
preference is a personal choice and adults understand the repercussions of unhealthy eating habits.
Hence
, it is not fair that state authorities impose
heavy duty
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taxes on
street
food
vendors.
For instance
, increasing taxes on local
food
stalls will lead to a price rise not making it an affordable option for
middle class
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workers.
Secondly
, hiking tariffs on junk
food
could actually have an adverse impact on
street
food
owners because there could be a possibility of them running out
on
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business
due to
reduced sales.
Consequently
,
this
will
further
lead
unemployment
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and poverty which can put unwanted pressure on the financial system of a country.
Hence
, concerned authorities should not intervene and disturb small businesses. To illustrate,
incase
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food
trucks and
road side
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hawkers hike their rates because of tax implications,
then
they might cease to exist as a popular option across the working class. In conclusion,
although
junk
food
can lead to health issues if not consumed in a controlled manner, imposing higher excise duties on
this
will severely affect its consumers
that
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who
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have a tight budget and
also
impact the livelihood of
street
vendors.
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