Junk/Street Food is the most affordable meal for the working class. But health problems due to rampant and uncontrolled consumption are being compounded. It has therefore become imperative for governments to impose a higher tax on them. To what extent do you agree to this arrangement by the government? Give your opinion.
Street
food
is very popular amongst working professionals, but heavy consumption of junk food
can also
lead to several health hazards. Hence
, it is argued that the government should introduce higher tax reforms to control its consumption. I do not agree with this
fact and believe authorities should not interfere in this
matter. This
essay will discuss relevant reason
to support my opinion. Fix the agreement mistake
reasons
Firstly
, professionals usually have a very hectic life and therefore
, street
food
is a convenient option that compliments their busy schedules. Furthermore
, it is extremely convenient for them because it is time saving
and affordable. Add a hyphen
time-saving
Moreover
, food
preference is a personal choice and adults understand the repercussions of unhealthy eating habits. Hence
, it is not fair that state authorities impose heavy duty
taxes on Add a hyphen
heavy-duty
street
food
vendors. For instance
, increasing taxes on local food
stalls will lead to a price rise not making it an affordable option for middle class
workers. Add a hyphen
middle-class
Secondly
, hiking tariffs on junk food
could actually have an adverse impact on street
food
owners because there could be a possibility of them running out on
business Change preposition
of
due to
reduced sales. Consequently
, this
will further
lead unemployment
and poverty which can put unwanted pressure on the financial system of a country. Change preposition
to unemployment
Hence
, concerned authorities should not intervene and disturb small businesses. To illustrate, incase
Correct your spelling
in case
food
trucks and road side
hawkers hike their rates because of tax implications, Correct your spelling
roadside
then
they might cease to exist as a popular option across the working class. In conclusion, although
junk food
can lead to health issues if not consumed in a controlled manner, imposing higher excise duties on this
will severely affect its consumers that
have a tight budget and Correct pronoun usage
who
also
impact the livelihood of street
vendors.Submitted by dipalisklc on
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