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Our personalities are predetermined as a result of our genes before we are born and there is nothing that can be done to alter our character traits. To what extent do you agree?

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It is often discussed that due to inherited parent's traits,
personality
 fixed by birth. Some
people
 argue that these genetic characteristics tend to maintain for a lifelong span but personally, I disagree that
personality
 is permanent, which could be affected by various individual circumstances.
To begin
 with,
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iving environment obviously demonstrates the matter pertaining to the theme. Most
people
 are usually spending much time with others to study or work where
people
 get used to accepting the conflicting personal feature of others in what they do not have. when it comes to these cases,
although
people
 had the gifted genetic trait by inborn, these characteristics could alter with surroundings and appropriate relationships, not maintaining until the death. Indeed, for those reasons, most twins have
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ifferent
personality
, respectively, can be a representative case.
Therefore
, several situations clearly san epitome of why I am not in
favor
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 of permanent
personality
 as innate.
Furthermore
, the government should do something for the public more than just learning subsidies. More importantly, the public administration should establish the valuable
centers
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 where parents could learn proper nurturing methods or ordinary
people
 could attempt
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vercome their drawbacks based on a theory which persons are affected by their own circumstance.
Additionally
, the government must implement public hearing and advertising to inform the public how much efficient it will be the long run to reform personal traits better than ever before. At
first
 glance, it may seem like that genes are the only way to intervene what is the personal traits, but the examples of environment exactly prove that individual characteristic could
be change
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 as much they
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.
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