Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a persons culture and character from their choice of clothes.Do you agree or disagree? (11GT-4) 11/01/21;Vinoth

There are
people
who
says
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that it is easy to judge
persons
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culture
and character by their way of dressing.
However
, I completely disagree with
this
thought because
people
in
this
modern era are wearing different types of dresses as well as they are adapting new
life style
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lifestyle
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from other cultures.
As a result
of globalisation,
people
are travelling to many countries
thus
,
people
are getting chances to wear
w
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ide variety of clothes which totally different from their
culture
.
For instance
, In India, until,
f
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ew decades
people
used to wear dhotis but now
people
are wearing suits and jeans it is because of globalisation and modernisation.
Therefore
, it is impossible to predict anyone's character by their way of dressing style, even if we predict there
is
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high chances of getting wrong.
Furthermore
,
people
are
adapting
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adopting
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new
culture
from other cultures because of the influence of television and
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nternet.
For example
,
last
year, one of the grand festivals in India name called "Holi" was celebrated in the streets of California, United
states
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.
Thus
, it clearly illustrated that
people
are started to celebrate different festivals from other cultures, so how come we can predict ones
culture
by their choice of clothes. To conclude,
people
are
traveling
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to different
palce
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places
place
for various purposes and adapting new dressing style and
culture
from
f
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oreign land.
Therefore
, it is impossible to predict
ones
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one's
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character and
culture
by their way of dressing.Even if we judge the
people
by it is their choice of clothes it might be wrong.
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