Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a persons culture and character from their choice of clothes.Do you agree or disagree? (11GT-4) 11/01/21;Vinoth

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that it is easy to judge

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and character by their way of dressing.

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thought because

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modern era are wearing different types of dresses as well as they are adapting new

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from other cultures.

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of globalisation,

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are travelling to many countries

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are getting chances to wear

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ide variety of clothes which totally different from their

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ew decades

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used to wear dhotis but now

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are wearing suits and jeans it is because of globalisation and modernisation.

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, it is impossible to predict anyone's character by their way of dressing style, even if we predict there

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high chances of getting wrong.

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from other cultures because of the influence of television and

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nternet.

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year, one of the grand festivals in India name called "Holi" was celebrated in the streets of California, United

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are started to celebrate different festivals from other cultures, so how come we can predict ones

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by their choice of clothes. To conclude,

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to different

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oreign land.

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character and

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by their way of dressing.Even if we judge the

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by it is their choice of clothes it might be wrong.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

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Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

247 words

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Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a persons culture and character from their choice of clothes.Do you agree or disagree? (11GT-4) 11/01/21;Vinoth

Word Count

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Schools should prepare students for the labour market and not waste tme and resources on theoretcal knowledge. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that using a bicycle as a main form of transportation has a lot of advantages whereas others think it has many disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.