Some people think that it’s better to ch0oose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe that it’s good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Choosing
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is extremely difficult. It can be argued that companion with similar mindset
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more beneficial than
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with a different viewpoint and sometimes disagree. I agree that
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who have
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imilar viewpoint are more valuable in life. In
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essay, both views will be discussed. To commence with,
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who have similar beliefs are likely to have more understanding. To explain it, if buddies have
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ame thinking, there is better chance to has the same view at similar topics or decisions.
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, it leads to better friendship and fewer disputes among them. I have few
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imilar viewpoint ,and we never have fought and have more understanding.
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, having buddies who have the same view are having more understanding.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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