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Some people think that news have no connection to people's lives, so then it is a waste of time to read the news in the newspaper and watch television news programs. Do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, the
world
 becomes a small village and most of the
countries
 are connected either economically or politically in
this
 case, the
events
 happened at any country will have an impact on others so, reading a newspaper and watching
news
 program is important.
This
 essay will demonstrate the importance of the
news
. In my opinion,
people
 should keep updating themselves about the situation of the
world
 especially surrounding
countries
. Some individuals believe that no need to give any attention or concern about the
events
 that are happening in some places in
this
world
 via reading the newspaper or attending
news
 program. The reason behind that since these incidents are not occurring in their country or their city so it will not have any impact on them. Recent research found that
this
 concept still exists between many
people
 especially those living in small
countries
.
This
 often results in several issues later on when they realized that these incidents might affect them economically.
However
, In the modern era, the majority of the nations have communication between each other's and the nature of
this
 connection can be economically or politically or both together
in addition
 to that, all
countries
 are organized under united nation organization.
People
 should believe that knowing the
events
 happening in the
world
 will give them the opportunity to understand that might these
events
 affect them economically or politically. BBC
News
 reported that
people
 living in developing
countries
 are more aware and following the
news
 by daily bases. In conclusion,
although
 maybe watching the
news
 for
events
 occurring out of your border not effecting you, knowing
this
news
 will keep you informed and updated about something that might affect you in future. It is worthy to spent daily some time to see and know the
events
 in the
world
 you are living in.
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