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Some people say that school education is not useful and the essence of study can be acquired at home. Do you agree? Why or why not?

#people #school #education #essence #study #home
A certain section of people in
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ociety strongly believe that
schools
 are not necessary
in
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 imparting education; since
home
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homeschooling
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schooling is an option. I do not agree with
this
 statement and
this
 essay will give relevant reasons to support my opinion.
Firstly
,
schools
 create an ideal environment
that is
 designed for students
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in order to help them study and gain knowledge. It imposes rules and regulations, coupled with a fixed time table customized for
children
 ensuring a well-designed academic program and maintaining
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ertain level of discipline.
For instance
, public and private
schools
 have fixed school timings along with a dress code and regime that students need to adhere to which cannot be followed at home.
Secondly
, attending an institution gives a pupil the opportunity to interact with a number of
children
 his/her age that builds qualities like sharing which cannot be taught if a student remotely.
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extra-curricular activities
such
 as sports and teaching workshops not only contribute
in
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 developing a child’s personality but
also
instill
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 important skills in them like teamwork
that is
 highly essential in throughout life. To illustrate, sporting tournaments and training camps conducted in
schools
 teach the younger generation how to conduct themselves in a group or team which is highly imperative once they pass out from school and enter the real world. In conclusion, traditional
schools
 are a better option for
children
 rather than remote schooling.
This
 is because they not only provide a structured education system
that is
 important for academic growth but
also
 gives
children
 the chance to nurture their social skills.
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