Now a days, public transport prices are constantly increasing. Why do you think it is happening? How can this problem be solved.

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It is been observed nowadays that
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accessing public transit systems are becoming dearer with every passing day. There are obvious reasons for
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, the constant rise in the
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of fossil fuels
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led to
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in the fares of public
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. The oil is a non-renewable source of energy which once depleted cant be created.
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research, owing to the petrol price rise, the London tube has increased its fares by 10
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every year.
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ncrease in the
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of commodities used will ultimately leed to a price hike for public
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.
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, there is a huge
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in the population in big cities, to
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accommodate
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the government has to
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the expenditure on
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ariety of sources, primarily infrastructure and public
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. The increasing expense is
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retrieved from the public in form of
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ncrease in fares for their use.
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, the
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modernisation
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of city
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in Mumbai has led to many exciting new features, like air-conditioning, touch screens. etc. but with the new features
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are now up by 15
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for
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buses
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. One of the
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problem is finding an alternative fuel source for mass transit. If the
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government
can negate the overhead of the single most expensive part of public
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i.e, fuel, they can save a lot of money and pass on the benefit to the travellers. To illustrate, there is an increasing trend of electric
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in India nowadays,
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buses
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are environment-friendly as no pollution, and are quite cheap in the
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run to the government.
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, it would solve the problem of fuel price fluctuations and
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ost incurred to the authorities. In conclusion, I believe that public
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a quite essential part of a growing economy, whose
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have to be controlled to a greater extent by the government by deploying innovative measures.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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