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Today more countries import food from different parts of the world .Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.Provide specific reasons and examples to support your amswer.

Many a country, these days, is importing
food
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 items from various parts of the globe.
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 and foremost ,high quality of
food
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,arguably ,could be supplied to the citizens.
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,Indian bananas are exported to different countries since they are rich in
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nutriential
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nutrient
 value.
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,certain foods are lower in price when imported.
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 aids in burgeoning the selling of those items.
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, when getting
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food
a portion of food
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food
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 from
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istant land,these would, undoubtedly ,
plays
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 a crucial role in developing the relationship between the nations.
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 to that , international trades are always beneficial to a country
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 causing a surge in
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tate’s economy.
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, importing foods give people to access more choices.Along with that, there is no need to get worried about the climatic conditions to grow a particular
food
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 as it could always be imported.
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,
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 imported foods show many
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positives
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,the negatives of the same should not be overlooked. Primarily,when depending on an alien country for edible items,it affects the local traders and is jeopardizing their future as well.
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inorder
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in order
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 to transport fresh fruits,
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arge amount of additives
as well as preservatives
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, as well as preservatives,
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 are added which inturn spoil its essential nutrients and are harmful .
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, pesticides are applied to fruits to keep them fresh which are harmful to the human body as well.
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,during transportation
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there are chances for the packages to get damaged.
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 cause a hike in the wastage of
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. To sum up, high quality, affordability and surge in
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ation’s economy are some of the benefits of importing
food
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.
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,these could affect local vendors adversely and may create unwanted health issues as well as
food
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 wastage.

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