Studies suggest that children spend more time watching TV than they did in the past and spend less on doing active or creative things. Why do you think it is the case? What measures and methods can be used to tackle with it?

Undeniably, entertainment

today's

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generation is more enticing than before, it could make the kids stay longer sitting

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watch

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, than going outside to play. In

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situation,we will discuss what is the cause of

this

.

Firstly

, as we reminisced the history of our childhood, we could say it was the best childhood ever, especially

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who were born in the '90s. We could spend our time playing games along the roads and allow ourselves to get wet when

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keeps pouring.

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, we loved to hang out with friends,

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some silly things,

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, we

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each company.

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, when I was a kid, I was satisfied with having a simple life, no electricity, water near to us,

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toys or gadgets,

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we

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each other because we

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friends to play with.

Secondly

, children find happiness in material things, they could stay overnight watching their favourite shows just to laugh, they don't want to play with other kids.

Therefore

, many of them

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less on outdoor games.

Also

, it could lead to illness and

another sickness

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other sicknesses

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as they were exposed

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too much radiation and

not

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having

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exercise. Apparently, we could encourage youngsters to be involved and be an active participant in sport.

For instance

, their parents will motivate them to be in a sports centre or camps that could help them to do physical activities.

Furthermore

, parents and teachers have a big responsibility

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the kids, they are the

one

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who can tell them what to do and let them participate in physical

works

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. In conclusion, as parents or adults, we will be an example to the young generation nowadays and tell them how important to be active and

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friends outside.