Do you Agree or disagree that celebrities are paid far too much money ? Give reasons for your answer

There is currently a contentious argument over whether well-known artists should earn less money than

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to be or not. I agree with the opinion since all the money spent should be used to come forward for

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's issues or even because it can be a bad influence on common workers. The main reason why I believe that their high salaries are not well employed is that celebrities do not play an important role in

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is because most parts of them opt for having a lavish lifestyle, which includes expensive cars, costly meals and fancy clothes;

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, they usually do not care about helping in

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's development.

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, essential professionals like medics, teachers and policemen,

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, tend to earn a minimum wage, which is definitely unfair since they contribute

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more than any artist in the world. Another reason why I support the notion that these types of

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should not earn an astronomic wage is that

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a bad influence on ordinary people.

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, considering that only a small portion of

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escapes from the poverty threshold,

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most part o them will never reach

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celebrity status, the woeful behaviour

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artists can demotivate them as they would give up

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their regular jobs if they

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pursued a famous career, which sometimes involves illegal activities.

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, some girls dream of being a supermodel and to do so they are often submitted to prostitution. In conclusion, I agree that celebrities are paid too much for a poor offset to

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's development. Given

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situation, it seems that all

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must give more valour to ordinary people who contribute

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a daily basis

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the common well-being and are considered

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essential professionals.