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Some people believe that public libraries are necessary, while others think they are useless what do you think?

It is irrefutable that nowadays most of the individual has educated. a segment of the society believes that libraries are compulsory for study.
however
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, another opinion that it is the wastage of time. I would discuss both statements in the upcoming paragraphs.
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 with,education has
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 important part of life. we go to school to study and learn moral values. A
library
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 is a place where
books
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 and sources of information are stored. we go to the
library
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 and read something about the knowledge. every type of
books
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 ,magazines, newspapers are there in the
library
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. we can sit on the athenaeum any kinds of the
book
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 read interpret there. There is a lot of libraries have open in local areas and every age group of persons can go there and no age limit. we can study in the
book
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 about any famous place, health-related and any story cartoon
books
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 have so on.
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, a few human beings believe that there is a wastage of time to go for
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l
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ibrary. There
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no interesting jokes in
books
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 for entertainment. people can take the
books
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 to free of cost but
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 people think that they gets torn
books
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 there and lines are
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 missing miss print in the
books
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. we cannot talk with others in the libraries. sometimes do not get the
book
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 we need.
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, now in the modern era, youngsters have not interested to read any kind of
books
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 in the
library
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. In conclusion, after analysis
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the above statement
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, we can read any kinds of
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b
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ook in the
library
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 but sometimes these
books
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 completely torn pages.

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