Some people think young people should go to university to further their education while others think they should been encouraged to work as car mechanics or builders etc. to serve society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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higher education in universities, while many suggest that it is important to encourage them to go to vocational schools and become electricians or construction workers. In my opinion, I believe that whatever career paths they choose can be beneficial to societies and it depends on an individual preference and their goals in life. By and large, obtaining a degree from universities is necessary as it is part of crucial requirements in order

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et a job in some certain fields

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as doctors, lawyers and engineers. It is widely recognized that these well-educated people can contribute enormously to

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society

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through their works.

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, healthcare professionals obviously play a major role in improving and providing a good healthcare system to a whole country and as a consequence, people

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live a

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lifestyle and have

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better health. For

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reason, I think it is important to have citizens with a higher degree to serve

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, other areas of expertise automobile mechanics or electricians,

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these people might not go to university, they can make great contributions through their works from real-life experience and practical skills. Obviously, life would be dull and difficult, if we do not have electricians to fix electricity problems for us.

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, it seems to me that it is unreasonable to encourage all youngsters to

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higher education as there are several fields, which do not need a university degree, being able to benefit

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. In conclusion, I believe that all careers can make a contribution to

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equally.

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, whether students should go to university or get a job depends on the type of work and field they interest.