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One of the most important issues facing the world today is a shortage of food and some think genetically modified foods are a possible solution. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Issues related to a lack of food are frequently discussed these days. It is argued that genetically modified food can solve the problem of the scarcity of food in many countries throughout the world. I firmly disagree with
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 following paragraph. The principal reason to consider is the harmful effects of the human body.
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 there is not an evidence report about the side effects, some scientists believe that genetically modified
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 can result in the development of diseases which are immune to antibiotics.
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, some experts revealed that the
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 contribute to increased cancer cells as well as allergic symptoms in some people. An additional point is that the production of genetically modified
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 has a direct impact on the environment in terms of biodiversity and the ecosystem.
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, the modified
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 transferred genes and organisms of plants become more strength than its prior plant.
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 means that existing species have been invaded by new dominant species.
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, GM
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;
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 as sweet corn, are a negative impact on the interaction between plants and insects reported in Cornell University. All things considered, I am of the opinion that genetically modified
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 are not a suitable way to tackle the lack of stuff problem.
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, governments and individuals should share responsibility and carefully considered a long-term solution to cope with
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 issue.
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