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We should ban all the advertisements aimed at children due to some negative effects. Agree or disagree?

#ban #advertisements #children #effects
Nowadays, with the expansion of communication, a large
amount
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 of
advertisements
,
specially
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 for
children
. It is suggested that
advertisements
 which target
at
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children
 should be prohibited because of their negative effects. In my opinion,
although
advertisements
 can trigger negative influences, I believe it should not be banned.
First
 of all, commercials aimed at
children
 make
r
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the
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elationship between parents and
children
 become worse.
Children
 are attracted easily by visual,
colors
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colours
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,
c
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the
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oncept of advertising and more likely to
itimate
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intimate
time
estimate
.
Notion
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 of some
advertisements
 is violent and
children
 will tend to become cruelty. Many companies use their
maketing
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marketing
 strategies to promote
about
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their fast
food
 or junk
food
 to
children
 with healthy visualization.
Children
 may be obese if they overeat
these
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food
.
However
,
advertisements
 target
at
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children
give
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gives
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 parents many choices when they have to something for their
children
. As an illustration
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,
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this
, if they want to buy
food
 or toys, they can refer
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to
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some commercial products and consider to purchase.
In addition
, In conclusion,
although
 advertisement which
target
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targets
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at
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apply
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children
 have many negative effects
such
 as impact health or temperament of
children
, we should not forbid it completely
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