In some countries it is traditional for men to work and for women to stay at home to look after the family. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

In several states, it is perceived conventionally that

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work

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for family's livelihood while

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stay at

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to care for their family members. In

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question from both points of views and

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give my own perspective on

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,

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only can concentrate on their

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and business when they are busy at

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. It is because they can be less concerned about a

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of households and matters at

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thanks to the

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staying at

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, despite when their

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are sick a

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, the

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can

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as usual without worrying about their

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since the

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deal with

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at

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, it is a good way to maintain

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’s emotional stability. The main reason is that as everyone knows, most

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feel physical stability by instinct when they stay at

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and while playing and reading with their mother. Actually, according to experiments in Korea, What mom is at

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helps

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to make more emotional development than when they go to a daycare centre or to stay with babysitters who are hired by their parents. That’s why the mothers who do not go to

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will spend energy and time for their

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.

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, I think it has more drawbacks.

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, a

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of

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lose their chance to

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in society

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unfortunately.

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, the longer

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stay at

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, they find it difficult to get a new job and career again as a

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of companies do not want to hire

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who have career breaks due to several reasons

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as

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’s competence(능숙함).

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, it causes serious economic and social losses as

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do not

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. The reason is quite obvious, there are numerous capable

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in modern society. If they do not

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for a long time, a

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of jobs which want

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could face serious problems

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as what remains vacant(공석). In conclusion, there are no easy answers as

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question has various different options.

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, to summarize

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essay, the merits are that the

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can focus on their

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more and

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could get mental stability from their mother.

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, a

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of

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could undergo hard to obtain a new job as well as there are lots of losses in society and the economy as they do not come back to their

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.