As transportation and housing problems increase in many cities, some governments are encouraging businesses to move to rural areas. Do you think the benefits outweigh the disadvantages?

In

this

contemporary era, industrialization plays an indispensable role in everybody's life. There are myriad advantages and drawbacks of promoting industries to

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ountryside in order to consider the issues of houses and transport facilities.

However

, as per my perception, merits of

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statement outweigh its demerits which will be discussed in upcoming paragraphs. To initiate

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, starting up businesses in rural

areas

give

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lethora of employment opportunities to rural individuals. Nowadays, there is a high trend of migration of people from

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ountryside to metropolitan

areas

in order to find work. If the businesses are established in rural

areas

,

then

there will not be any need for people to live away from their families.

As a result

,

this

gives them the facility to do work by living in their hometown.

Furthermore

, moving business to rural

areas

will be advantageous for urban individuals as there will be less

pollution

in city centres. If there are

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industries in urban

areas

,

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irrefutably

, it

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less waste and ultimately, reduces the level of

pollution

in the cities. To exemplify, numerous waste of companies in the form of air or water would be reduced in urban

areas

which

further

decreases the

pollution

and diseases occurred because of these waste fumes. On the flip side, the major disadvantage of

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transferring

businesses to rural

areas

is the

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gap

between

producers

and

consumers

.It is an undeniable fact that customer is a king of the market, so shifting organisations to villages give a huge communication gap between manufacturers and

consumers

.

Therefore

, it creates

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difficulty for

producers

to produce the goods according to the demand of its

consumers

.

This

ultimately

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causes

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oss for both masses.

For instance

,

producers

of shampoos could not update their products according to the preference of its customers which may create

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oss for

producers

, if the good

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suitable for

consumers

. To conclude,

although

, there are certain demerits of moving business to rural

areas

including

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ap between manufacturers and customers,

however

, I personally believe that there are advantages are more as

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give rise to employment opportunities to rural people and less

pollution

in urban

areas

.