As transportation and housing problems increase in many cities, some governments are encouraging businesses to move to rural areas. Do you think the benefits outweigh the disadvantages?

In
this
contemporary era, industrialization plays an indispensable role in everybody's life. There are myriad advantages and drawbacks of promoting industries to
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ountryside in order to consider the issues of houses and transport facilities.
However
, as per my perception, merits of
this
statement outweigh its demerits which will be discussed in upcoming paragraphs. To initiate
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, starting up businesses in rural
areas
give
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lethora of employment opportunities to rural individuals. Nowadays, there is a high trend of migration of people from
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ountryside to metropolitan
areas
in order to find work. If the businesses are established in rural
areas
,
then
there will not be any need for people to live away from their families.
As a result
,
this
gives them the facility to do work by living in their hometown.
Furthermore
, moving business to rural
areas
will be advantageous for urban individuals as there will be less
pollution
in city centres. If there are
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less
industries in urban
areas
,
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, it
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less waste and ultimately, reduces the level of
pollution
in the cities. To exemplify, numerous waste of companies in the form of air or water would be reduced in urban
areas
which
further
decreases the
pollution
and diseases occurred because of these waste fumes. On the flip side, the major disadvantage of
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transffering
businesses to rural
areas
is the
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between
producers
and
consumers
.It is an undeniable fact that customer is a king of the market, so shifting organisations to villages give a huge communication gap between manufacturers and
consumers
.
Therefore
, it creates
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difficulty for
producers
to produce the goods according to the demand of its
consumers
.
This
ultimately
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oss for both masses.
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,
producers
of shampoos could not update their products according to the preference of its customers which may create
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oss for
producers
, if the good
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is not find
suitable for
consumers
. To conclude,
although
, there are certain demerits of moving business to rural
areas
including
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ap between manufacturers and customers,
however
, I personally believe that there are advantages are more as
this
give rise to employment opportunities to rural people and less
pollution
in urban
areas
.
Submitted by Harmeet Singh Khera on

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