In some countries, only few young people go to classical music concerts or or play classical music. Why? Should young people be encouraged to attend and learn more?

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A small number of youngsters see
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lassical
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concert or play classical
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in numerous nations. In my opinion, it is
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are occasion that a young man has an interest in classical
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now, and it is wrong to insist teenagers to acquiring skill in piano and listen
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classical
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of all, a normal school student listens
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modern
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and assume classical
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is
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. The children will not understand it, as it is out-dated only people living 400 years ago
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choice.
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, it does not
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its value today, as it relaxes our mind and body.
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it is regarded as luxurious art, so wealthy and noble people prefer classical
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and teach it their children.
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, if we observe affluent noblemen in the UK, they are competent in
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iano.
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, it is no wonder why the overwhelming majority of people do not like it.
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, every child is not obliged to learn the instrument and listen
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, as everyone is unique.
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, not every child will acquire skill in playing
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iano, as it does not appeal
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all youngsters.
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, it is said that a fish swims better than any animal in the water, but it would suffer if it gets obligated to climb a tree.
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, children must make choices by themselves. In conclusion, from the answers and examples given, I firmly believe classical
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is an old trend and not suitable for teenagers living in the
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century, and there is no meaning in insisting the young generation to listen
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Exposure
  • Perception
  • Old-fashioned
  • Elitist
  • Financial investment
  • Competing interests
  • Entertainment options
  • Digital music
  • Video games
  • Social media
  • Cultural understanding
  • Cognitive benefits
  • Affordable tickets
  • Free concerts
  • Music education programs
  • Modern adaptations
  • Collaborations
  • Relatable
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