In some countries, only few young people go to classical music concerts or or play classical music. Why? Should young people be encouraged to attend and learn more?
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concert or play classical music
in numerous nations. In my opinion, it is r
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now, and it is wrong to insist teenagers to acquiring skill in piano and listenChange the wording
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and assume classical music
is orhtodox
. The children will not understand it, as it is out-dated only people living 400 years ago Correct your spelling
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choice. However
, it does not lost
its value today, as it relaxes our mind and body. Change the verb form
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Besides
it is regarded as luxurious art, so wealthy and noble people prefer classical music
and teach it their children. For instance
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Thus
, it is no wonder why the overwhelming majority of people do not like it.
On the other hand
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, as everyone is unique. In addition
, not every child will acquire skill in playing p
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For example
, it is said that a fish swims better than any animal in the water, but it would suffer if it gets obligated to climb a tree. Hence
, children must make choices by themselves.
In conclusion, from the answers and examples given, I firmly believe classical music
is an old trend and not suitable for teenagers living in the 21th
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