Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Following the population increase,
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has been being created much more than before. Of course,
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should concern be concerned with what they have done to
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beautiful Earth.
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ubbish.
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, the government must impose laws to restrict the quantity of created
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. The concept of reducing
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and recycling should be taught to
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when they are young. In Taiwan, it is common to see teachers teaching children how to separate the normal
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and recyclable
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of the approaches is for the children too they teach children to squeeze the
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to make them smaller.
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, it is not uncommon that, even everyone knows how to deal with the
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, they still create them much every day. Especially in the developed countries, take away and delivery systems have been developing, and modern
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because
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are too busy to prepare their own
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or drink. It is common to see how many
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just go to restaurants or order
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on smartphone applications delivery applications, and they can get the
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which is packed in plastic
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that will lead to even more
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in 20 to 30 minutes. In many countries,
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as Taiwan, the government has been imposing laws demanding that supermarkets, convenience stores, restaurants and drink
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should not provide the plastic bags, disposable tableware, and plastic straws. So that
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will have to bring their own bags when they go shopping; bring, their own
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when they take away
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from restaurants
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bring or their own straws and bottles when they go to coffee
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and drink
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. Following
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law and promoting their business,
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, many
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implement would hold the events where that, if consumers bring their own
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or bottles, they can get discounts for one or two new Taiwan dollarsNTD., and
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getting run getting deeply rooted in the Taiwanese’s mind, making the law an effective way to reduce
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ubbish. . It is an effective way to reduce
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ubbish. It is undeniable that
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has been increasing due to the
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population
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, there are still some ways to improve
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circumstance
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education seems to be helping, the law is much more effective.
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, the government should restrict the quantity of
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severely which everyone has made in order to return the ordinal beautiful the earth to its original beauty.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumerism
  • disposable culture
  • over-packaging
  • non-recyclable
  • public awareness
  • waste management
  • environmental impact
  • recycle
  • recycling facilities
  • waste separation
  • single-use products
  • infrastructure
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