Governments give a lot of support to artists, even though some people think it is a waste of money that could have been used elsewhere. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Traffic
congestion and
pollution
are two pressing issues all over the world. As the majority of
cars
and bikes are petrol driven, elevating petrol
price
can reduce their numbers on the roads, and
as a result
, help control
traffic
congestions and
pollution
to a great extent, I believe. Unlike the past, when only rich people could afford automobiles, a majority of car and motorbike owners, these days, are from middle-class families.
Therefore
, a higher fuel cost will affect their budget, and many of them might opt-out using petroleum driven
cars
.
Such
surge in prices will increase the demand for public transportations which is by far the most efficient way to pull out the
pollution
and
traffic
jam problems.
Moreover
,
such
a
price
hike will make eco-friendly automobiles popular.
For instance
, electric
cars
, or CNG or LPG driven vehicles can become a viable option for consumers.
Although
it cannot reduce
traffic
problems, it can reduce pollutions effectively. Other solutions can
also
be considered
instead
of upscaling petroleum
price
only.
To begin
with, the government can implement policies to restrict the number of
cars
per family can own, and
also
offer subsidies to citizens to purchase electric
cars
. An approach can be implemented by states where number plates ending with odd numbers can use some roads during rush hours while
cars
with even number plates can run on other streets.
Besides
, citizens should change their mindset and help the authority in curbing
traffic
jams and pollutions. All in all, a wide range of solutions is available to help cope with
traffic
and
pollution
problem. Increase
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fuel
price
and public transportations are as possible solutions.

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