Some organisations believe that their employees should dress smartly. Others value quality of work above appearance. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Numerous characters deem office
workers
should dress officially;
in contrast
, certain groups of people oppose and affirm a staff's productivity is the most essential thing to agonise. In
this
essay, I will discuss,
firstly
, the merit wearing uniform at workplaces, and
secondly
, the negative aspect of
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neglecting

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neglegting
clothing and prefer output
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at
the
first
place. On the one hand, it is an inevitable fact that an organisation becomes well-regulated when its staffs wear sensibly, following
this
incidence, a corporation's profit will increase. If
workers
wear casually, customers will not
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recognize

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recongnize
who is a staff and who is a client.
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, Shangri-La,
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a

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ell-known hotel in Mongolia, stated
workers
must dress officially, and other prosperous corporations follow the same policy.
Thus
,
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clothing
an article of clothing
an item of clothing

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a clothing
plays an essential role in a company.
On the other hand
, people putting importance on
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the

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p
roductivity of their employees overlook that a person is inclined to talk with others when he or she dresses freely. Labourers do not feel
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apply

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themselves
as employees of a corporation, so it is
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an

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and
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the

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ndeniable fact that
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they

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will not perform with
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responsibility

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responsibillity
and diligently at workplaces.
For example
, bankrupted companies
such
as Google, Apple, and Samsung usually did not
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obligate

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obligated
workers
to wear formally, meaning the companies were not well-organised.
Hence
, a strict policy of firms is the key to run business. In conclusion, form the arguments and examples given, I firmly believe the virtue of uniform is immeasurable for business, and people rejecting it will waste money and time. Put more attention to output more than
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utfit, which is not optimal in most cases.

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