Companies should provide sports and social facilities for local communities. What extent do you agree?
It appears that there is a missing preposition after the word question. Consider adding the preposition.
It appears that you have an unnecessary comma after the subordinating conjunction because. Consider removing the comma.
It appears that you are missing a comma after the introductory phrase in some cities. Consider adding a comma.
It appears that the preposition under may be unnecessary in this context. Consider removing it.
The noun phrase higher demand seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
It appears that you are missing a comma after the introductory phrase in some countries. Consider adding a comma.
It appears that you are missing a comma after the introductory phrase due to the fact that in some areas the authority doesn't pay a lot of attention to the events happening in the city. Consider adding a comma.
Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Examples make your writing easier to understand by illustrating points more effectively.
Examples, if used properly, not only help you get higher marks for ‘Task Response’ but also for ‘Coherence’.
When giving examples it is best to put them after your main idea or topic sentence. They can be used in the middle of supporting sentences or they can be used to start a new sentence. There is no rule for where exactly to give examples in essays, logically they would come after your main idea/topic sentence or just after a supporting sentence.
Linking words for giving examples:
- for example
- for instance
- to illustrate this
- to give a clear example
- such as
- to illustrate
- take, for example
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