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It is often thought that the increase in juvenile crime is a direct influence of the increase in violence in media. To what extent do you agree with the above statement?

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It is argued that nowadays youngsters are consuming vast information from
media
such
 a cinema, television,
media
 and most important social-
media
. I totally agree with the statement as the violent content display in
media
 make the teenager more offender.
This
 essay will explore different role play by
media
 to exacerbating the problem in juvenile crime. To being with,the
media
 promote illegal and offensive
activities
. these day many movies, TV series, Web Servies celebrate law-breakers and they portray criminal
activities
 as an
adventures
Correct the article-noun agreement
adventure
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 and fun.
As a result
, it
encourage
Change the verb form
encourages
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 the kids to break the law and get involved in illegal
activities
. Recently, there was news of 4 young boys were performing
s
Add an article
a
the
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tunt in moving train to record the video of the activity and share it on social
media
.Henceforth, other kids
also
 started to emulate them and soon became a social trend on social
media
.
In addition
 to
this
, the
media
 is not censored self-content. Videos and news of killing and attacking or other
activities
, which can be diverting effect on kids mentality and presented without any thought.
As a result
, teenagers are more psychologically affected by
such
 content and get more prone to aggressive behaviour. As an example, in a recent video showing a boy killed his girlfriend for refusing to marry him. In conclusion,
Media
 is promoting aggressive behaviour through television, cinema, songs and various other ways. If
this
 tends is not reduced and corrected in time, it will have many negative effects on society for a long-term
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