You are looking for a part-time job at a football club. Write a letter to the manager of the football club. In your letter, • introduce yourself • explain what experience and special skills you have • tell him/her when you think you could start

Dear Sir, I have recently seen your advertisement for a part-time personal trainer position, and I would like to apply for the role. My name is John Smith and I am a final year graduate student in the Australian Sporting Academy (ASA). As I have
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The noun phrase great passion seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

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reat passion for sports, I am majoring in health science for
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It appears that the noun sport is being used as an adjective, but you may have chosen incorrectly between the singular and plural form. Consider changing the noun form.

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professionals. Being a football player, I participate in inter-state football leagues and received a number of awards as ‘man of the match’. I understand the psychology of the players and determine the level of physical training required for top performance.
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, I recently worked as an instructor at our local gym for three months before it permanently shut down the business. As I study only four days a week, I am available Friday, Saturday and Sunday. I believe I can contribute significantly to your organisation if I have been given an opportunity to work here.
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, I can start as early as
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week and flexible with any salary. I look forward to hearing from you. Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully, John Smith

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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