Some people suggest that sport helps people learn about teamwork, but others say it can encourage to be too competitive. Discuss both views and give your own opinion?

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are common in all age groups. Some folks believe that

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people in developing

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kill like teamwork, while others say it motivates them to become more competitive. On one hand, most of the popular

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that are played

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days like cricket, football, rugby or hockey involves teamwork as they play as a

team

and not as individuals. In

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case, the participants are expected to play as a

team

and lack of coordination among them

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can result in defeat.

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, in the game of football, players

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to pass to each other to drive them forward toward the rival's goal,

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if they go on to showcase their individual skills, they are stopped by the opponents very quickly. In a nutshell, games that are meant to play as a

team

needs teamwork than individual skills to succeed.

On the other hand

,

sports

can be competitive too. The drive, resilience and hunger of a player to be the best among his/her peers is the sheer cause of

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friendly competition with the other members can help in

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honing the skills and motivates him/her to excel more on the pitch.

For example

, the Indian

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captain

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in an interview stated what

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he compromised and how much practice it took to become a player of his level and vying with the world's best.

However

, in a

team

game like cricket or football, trying to prove he/she is the best by neglecting their teammates is a major flaw which can cause some serious issues. In my opinion,

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needs to

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as a group, coordination is an imperative skill

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required.

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helps in developing the

team

as a group than focus on individual abilities.

However

, some friendly competition should be often encouraged to reach their full potential. To conclude,

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important to

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with coordination and understanding to gain success and

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friendly competition among teammates really pushes the players for an even positive impact and achieve their dream. Everyone should appreciate the winning as a

team

,

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losing the game via individualistic

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