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TODAY MORE AND MORE TOURISTS ARE VISITING PLACES WHERE CONDITIONS ARE DIFFICULT SUCH AS THE SAHARA DESERT OR THE ANTARTIC. WHAT ARE THE BENEFITS AND DISADVANTAGES FOR TOURISTS WHO VISIT SUCH PLACES?

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Many visitors prefer to go to
places
 where weather conditions are extreme like the Sahara Desert or
the
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Antarctica. There are many pros and cons for tourists who go to
such
places
 for holidays. In
this
 essay, I will discuss both the views. On one hand, there are many advantages of travelling to
such
places
 where weather is very difficult.
Firstly
, it aids in boosting their tourism industry where means of employment are very limited. Most of the inhabitants are able to survive with the help of
this
 industry. Due to weather conditions, people are not able to get
involve
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 in other occupations.
For instance
, as per the report by Times Mirror, 45
percent
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 of the people at
S
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ahara Desert are starving due to ongoing pandemic.
On the other hand
,
this
 kind of tourism has its own negative impacts. The resources for survival at these
places
 are extremely limited and tourists need to utilise these scarce sources which
leads
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 to the crisis in the lives of the local population. They need to cut-on their needs and requirements in order to fulfil the needs of visitors.
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, as per the survey conducted by
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ational Health Mission, 32% of children are suffering from malnutrition in colder regions. In conclusion, while visiting
to
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the
places
 where conditions are harsh can be beneficial for the local residents because it provides them employment, it is important to pay attention to the costs as well which these residents pay due to the less essential items.
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 items.
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