Everybody should be allowed admission to university study programs regardless of their level of academic ability. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, everyone ought to have the
possitibility
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possibility
to
enroll
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at the
University
without
consider
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the
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academic skills. Supporting each
students
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student
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can improve the education level of the country.
This
essay completely agrees with that statement. I believe that all students can have the chance to start
the
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University
and understand if they want to follow the
study
or go to work.
First
of all, admission at the
university
can be free by the
entry
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exam that
attest
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the capacity of the
student
.
This
is a good
opportuny
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opportunity
for the
student
as they can decide what type of faculty start.
For example
, if the entry test abolished, more
student
would
wanted
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to continue the
study
.
As a result
, the general knowledge among the people
study
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at the faculty where they have more ability and interest and so they will
achive
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achieve
good results in their future carrier.
Secondly
, the open
enroll
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at the
university
can
be increase
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the interest in
student
to follow the educational training.
Therefore
, the valuation of
a
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cademic ability of the
student
will be appropriate with the interest and knowledge
acquire
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during the
university
. In fact,
u
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ndergraduate can improve their knowledge on the subject that
study
.
Then
, the professor will
evaluete
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evaluate
the academic ability of the students. In conclusion, give the possibility to start the
university
has a positive impact on the
student
' life. As far as I am concerned, going to
university
can be promoted by educational
istitute
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institute
it is the best option for
many
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student
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after
the
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higher education.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • academic ability
  • admission criteria
  • equal opportunities
  • higher education
  • institutional resources
  • merit-based
  • qualification devaluation
  • under-qualification
  • vocational training
  • inclusive education
  • diversity in academia
  • competitive edge
  • global economy
  • academic standards
  • universal access
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