Companies should provide sports and social facilities for local communities. What extent do you agree?

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It is commonly believed, that big industry can contribute to the local people in terms of sport and social service. In my opinion, I agree to the above statement to a large extent as

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act of kindness will bring the talented ones who cannot afford it, and charitable events can be helpful for those who are in need, along with which the company’s reputation will be increased. To commence with,

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, huge companies can conduct social services in rural areas to be more specific as it will have a significant impact on the community

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mainly suffering from poverty.

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, individual who are good in sports may not have enough opportunity to succeed in it, due to lack of money and facilities. In order to bring out young talent and for the development of

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individuals, big organisations can offer sports equipment or conduct campaigns providing training and short courses and so on.

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, one of my friends who obtained his scholarship from 'Britania Milk Bikkis' by taking part in their yearly IQ contest and he won the title.

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, through

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an act of humanity, it will generate a good impression of the business in the market.

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, it is considered that giving back to the consumers will only benefit us in the form of goodwill in return, which is an indirect aspect of the advertisement. To cite an example, when a flood occurred in the state of Kerala in India, food delivery firm ‘Zomato’, has contributed free food for those who have been affected.

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, it has become a talk of the town after the recovery of people which was an added advantage to their company's profit and reputation.

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, social help by huge industries to society will be a win-win situation from both perspectives. To conclude, I deem that, reputed firms can join to provide good amenities and encourage the folks who are interested in physical activities.

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, it is left to the owners of the business to make

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decisions, as it cannot be forced by law or the citizens.

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