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Artists need a certain amount of freedom to develop their creativity. Some people think that artists should have total freedom to express any thoughts and ideas. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Visionary
people
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 are very well known as an open mind
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,Some of us argue that these
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people should
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 express themselves without any barrier.I agree with the view that
everyone
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 should have the
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 to express, but we have to maintain a limit especially public person because they could be seen as a leader. Nowadays, we have the opportunity to live in an era where we can think freely and have total
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.Artists express through their work without any barriers.
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 is a good thing in a free world, but sometimes an idea can lead to some intellectual or physical conflicts.
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, religion is a very debated theme in our times.In
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 area should be imposed some barriers, if an artist wants to draw or say something negative could have a personal impact on others.Another good example could be someone who presents a broadcast.
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 person should be more objective than subjective when he speaks about subjects which are very sensible for the public.The personal idea is not so important in
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 TV programmes.Total
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 should not understand wrong and to try to censure ourselves.
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 to
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,
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 should be for
everyone
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, not only for artists or public person.
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 is a right for
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.
People
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 just need to make the difference between good ar bad, wrong or right.Artist is sometimes seen like leaders, they are a model for the rest of the
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, especially for the youngsters.At some point their thoughts and ideas should be controlled by governments,
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,if a book instigates to hate, that book should be restricted to the public. To sum up, I agree with the view that
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 in thoughts and ideas of an artist is very important, but some rules should be for
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 regarding decency, respect and adecvate language.

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • creativity
  • freedom of expression
  • innovative
  • ethical considerations
  • societal morals
  • unregulated
  • provoke thought
  • controversy
  • government regulation
  • censorship
  • diverse perspectives
  • artistic expression
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