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In several years many languages have died out. Some say it is not important because if we speak fewer languages, life would be easier. Do you agree or disagree?

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Few topics have drawn as much scholarly attention as the extinction of
languages
, especially in the past few years.
Although
 there is substantial advocacy for
this
 trend, I am of the opinion that
this
 advocacy in unwarranted, as it fails to take countless drawbacks entwined with the
death
 of
languages
. Primarily, with a language, humans can express their thoughts without any struggle which is a huge step for the progress of humans. Thanks to various types of
languages
, people can express their feelings in different ways. On the one hand, by learning different
languages
, one can improve his problem-solving skills. On the other, different types of
languages
 have different types of arts-related to them where locals transfer those arts to the
next
 generations through their native language. Needless to say, all these benefits will stand in good stead among humans as far as their progress is concerned. Admittedly, it is true that the
death
 rate of local
languages
 is skyrocketing and one can not dismiss the deleterious effects associated with it.
Besides
, the popularity of global
languages
 like English and technology play a key in the
death
 of many
languages
. People today want to learn only globally recognised
languages
 and ignoring the importance of other
languages
. Not only the extinction of
languages
 can destroy the way of communication, but
also
 various arts associated with them. Examples of
this
 scenario can be seen in many countries like Eygpt where many of their ancient arts are died because of the
death
 of ancient
languages
. In conclusion, I would not wish to underestimate the popularity of global
languages
.
Nevertheless
, I feel that the effects of
e
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xtinction of
languages
 are far too great to ignore.
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