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Nowadays, many people buy household goods (like television, rice cookers, etc). do you think this is a positive or negative development?

#people #household #goods #television #rice #cookers #development
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Recently, the number of
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 who can afford
household
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goods
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 as television and vacuum cleaners is higher than it was in the past.
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 is because those apparatus is cheaper than it was some years ago. In my opinion, it is extremely positive how those products have become more affordable and
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 with,
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goods
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 make
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's
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 more enjoyable. Some of those products have a lot of interesting features that it is unimaginable to live without it. Television,
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, has so many good contents that one could spend hours watching without noticing the time passing by. There are numerous different channels and
people
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 can choose what they like to watch.
People
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 can use television even to learn new subjects through youtube.
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, it is surprisingly positive how some of those
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goods
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 have helped
people
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 to do some difficult and time-consuming activities.
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, I believe these apparatus have made
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's
life
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 ease. To illustrate, vacuum cleaners is one equipment that I consider as essential. Doing activities that were so boring,
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 as cleaning the dust, has become even funny.
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,
people
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 have been working so hard recently, that every piece of equipment designed to make
people
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's
life
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 more easy and entertaining I consider as a positive development. To sum up,
household
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goods
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 are not only positive development but
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 essential. Those equipment have made
people
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's
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 easier than it was in the past. I suggest that the government reduce tax on those products to allow more
people
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 to buy it.
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