You rent a four-bedroom house, which you share with two other students. However, there are several problems with this house that need fixing. You also find it expensive and would like to find another student to share the spare bedroom. Write a letter to the estate agency. In the letter - Explain your situation - Describe the problems with the house - Say what you would like to happen

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Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Vitor Pina and I am the tenant of your four-bedroom house.  I am writing
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about some issues in the property that need to be repaired and are not cheap.
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,the kitchen sink is leaking. I always leave a bucker
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it, so the room does not flood.
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,it needs to be changed at least three times a day.
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, the living room window does not close completely,
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in the winter we cannot use it because it gets as cold as outside.
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,there is some mould in the laundry ceiling. Since we still have one empty room and the list of the repairs is extensive, it would cost a lot of money to fix.
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I would like to rent the spare bedroom so the cost of the repairs is shared with one more person. I look forward to your reply so we can look for a new student to move in. Regards,
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