Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays, bilingualism has become so popular
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the world. It is widely believed that
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to get into that particular country in the sake of making
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areer or to explore
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certain area. Having said that, some
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assume that there is
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ot only
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ingle reason behind
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learning
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try to learn some other
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considering their visiting plan and
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ajority of
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try to be
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to communicate with the general public while staying there. For
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, one of my cousins is learning
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rench
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because
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he wants to communicate with French citizens in their own
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so that there will not be any communication barrier between them as he is visiting
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France
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week.
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, Those who
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to make
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areer on others land , it is mandatory to be fluent and excellent on their
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to get
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easily. To illustrate
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, many
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of my country are studying
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language
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to get a decent
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in Korea.
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, foreign
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is learnt especially by those who
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to go for a trip or for a
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in that certain area.
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learn
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ew
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just to know about their culture and most importantly as a hobby. In another word, to know
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particular culture , it is basic to learn
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anguage.To exemplify, I had one peer from
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subject for some persons as it kills the boredom when we try to get into
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,there are so many
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on social
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media and
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speaking person and they find tremendous fun and excitement while doing so.
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,
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learn languages to know the tradition and because of their eager desire to learn. All in all, both the views have their own
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clarification
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justification
,having said that, I think
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arge number of
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learning
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due to their visiting plan and the
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as it is compulsory to have knowledge of
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anguage while staying on different country. But we can not ignore the fact that there are still some
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it to learn the tradition and simply to spend their time in a fruitful way.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • multilingual
  • linguistic proficiency
  • globalized world
  • cross-cultural communication
  • immersive experience
  • adaptability
  • cultural exchange
  • interpersonal skills
  • employment prospects
  • empathy
  • intellectual development
  • overcome language barriers
  • global market
  • resourceful
  • life-changing
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