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Parents should spend more time with their children helping them with their homework. Agree/disagree?

#parents #time #children #homework
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It is often argued that
parents
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 should spend extra
time
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 with their
children
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 in order to assist them with their homework. I totally agree with
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 viewpoint because it will help
parents
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 to know about their
children
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’s weak subject and they can
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 keep an eye on their
progress
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.
First
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 of all,
parents
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 nowadays are much more concerned about their child’s studies and their difficulty in understanding certain
subjects
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. So, if they teach them by giving them some extra
time
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, it will eventually help them master the
subjects
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 their kids need assistance with. It will not only improve their child’s grades but
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 make them more interested in learning.
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,
parents
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 must give some more
time
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 to their
children
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 in order to teach them and to know which
subjects
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 they are struggling with.
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,
parents
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’ tutoring can help them understand their child’s academic
progress
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. If
parents
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 stay with their
children
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 to help them complete their homework, they can keep an eye on their
children
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. It will no longer be a concern for them whether their kids complete homework every day or not. They do not need to worry if their
children
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 are indulging in some
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time wasting
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 activities like social media. They can keep track of their
progress
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.
For instance
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, mostly
children
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 who fail in some
subjects
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 tend to lie at home that they passed the exams. But if they are studying under the
parents
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’ supervision, the chances of fooling
parents
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 will decrease.
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, it is advisable that
parents
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 must take some extra
time
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 out of their hectic schedule for tutoring kids and to track their
progress
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. To conclude, it is certainly important that
parents
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 give their precious
time
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 to their
children
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 to help them academically so that they can enhance their study skills for their bright future.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • parental involvement
  • academic development
  • parent-child relationship
  • supported and encouraged
  • confidence and independence
  • educational strategies
  • autonomous learning
  • foster a love for learning
  • tailored interventions
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