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These days, more and more people are going to other countries for significant periods of time, either to find a job or to study. There are clearly many benefits to doing this, but people who live abroad can also face some difficulties. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living and working in a foreign country.

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For many
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, abandoning their
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 home to live in a different
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 is not only a big dream
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 a huge challenge. Surely, there are several benefits and drawbacks in living abroad. But from my point of view, upsides overcome downsides, and I intend to discuss it throughout
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 essay. There is no doubt that spending a couple of years in another nation has a lot of advantages.
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 of them is having access to a better quality of life.
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, many
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 in underdeveloped countries, especially young adults, do
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 journey aiming to have either good education or better job opportunities. Another point is that living abroad is a great chance of learning about new cultures, which can lead you to be more
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 and respectful with others.
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 downsides in making
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 choice. The distance from family and friends,
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, could be a hard
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. Mainly when you have to deal with hard situations being far from loved ones.
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 more relevant problem that can face foreigners is
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ultural shock. A good example is that
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 from cold countries are usually less friendly than those from tropical nations.
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, a native of a tropical
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 can feel loneliness and sorrow when living in a freezing
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, these issues can be managed and overcome, and
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 be a great growth opportunity that makes
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 more confident and independent. In conclusion, facing a new life in a different
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 for a while is a tendency today. And despite some cons as cultural shock and distance from family, pros outweigh it, making
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 experience a good chance of learning and growing.
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