Fewer and fewer young people are choosing to become teachers. Why do young people not want to be teachers? How could this be changed?
The vast majority of
people
today consider that it is preferable not to choose c
areer of a teacher. As far as I am concerned, it is a critical problem for our future, and we must change it by upgrading working conditions of tutors and returning to the teachers status of Add an article
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an honorable members
of society.
From my point of view, if we ignore the problem that children nowadays are not devoted Correct the article-noun agreement
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edagogue, we will have difficulties with school education in the nearest future. Add an article
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Moreover
, if we had started reforms in our education 10 years ago, we could have dodged at least some of them. However
, right now people
are choosing other jobs even if they like tutoring,
because they do not want to suffer from governmental disrespect and low quality of life. Remove the comma
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For instance
, even people
with degrees in education, instead
of working in elementary school with children, would likely decide to work as a tutor with adults, because it is more profitable and pleasant.
To my way of thinking, government, commercial and non-profitable organisations, if they want to have educated workers and grow their number, must help our pedagogical universities and colleagues with financing and advertising and our schools with better equipment and their stuff with raising of salary. If we were able to make this things
happen, it would at least save us from teachers shortage for a while. Change the determiner
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these things
For example
, people
who have been wanting to teach people
, but were not able to survive on teachers payroll, might change their mind.
To conclude, frequently people
today avoiding p
rofession of teacher, because they are afraid of working conditions and low social status. It is a scary Add an article
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tendence
, and we must change Correct your spelling
tendency
this things
to regain Change the determiner
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opularity of that profession.Add an article
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite