Modern technology now allows rapid and uncontrolled access to and exchange of information. Far from being beneficial, this is a danger to our societies. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

There is a free flow of information which is accessed and exchanged significantly in the boom of

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Technological age.

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can easily take

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of its convenience and high speed, I strongly believe that there are still some hidden risks that people should

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with, offensive information including pornography

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not strictly regulated by the government,

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easily spread without age-restricted. Teenagers who are usually inquisitive about the world around them can be wrongly educated by

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negative knowledge.

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, there are a huge amount of unillegal sexual websites which are omnipresent on the Internet,

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thousands of young adult users annually.

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, untruth news about politics and economics can make teenagers become

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. Another point is

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technological advancement has no strict legislation,

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pose a threat to the private data of users. With the freedom

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social networking

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, any private ones may be easily known by a vast amount of strangers.

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take a piece of news that happened in America as an example.

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report could be read by millions of people at the same time around the world immediately just some minutes later. Admittedly, they could face health problems if

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overuse its usefulness.

For instance

, spending too much time on computers would harm both mental and physical health and increase the risks of some diseases like obesity, diabetes, short-sightedness and depression.

To sum up

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I believe modern technology is very beneficial, it has some aspects that people should take into account and remedy its problems.